read my story!!!

[Das Mole]

here's my story, it's fairly short, but that's only the first part, i'm partly through writing #2.

the story is called 'the phantom penny' and it's about...well, you'll see if you read it it's not about a penny, it's about a girl, but i think it's interesting, and it keeps getting better and better. i've done both the covers, i drew them by hand, and the first cover says "the phantom penny" and has a big drawing of the front side of a penny (i think i did a good job), and the second cover you wouldn't understand until you read the first book. anyway...

here's my story!!!!

i hope you like it, i'm not sure if that's the right link, but if it's not, just take another link to chapters 1-3, there should be a link on every page to a different part of the story. there's one that leads to my homepage, so go there if you want, and there's one for my 'amazing race' update page, which i've given up on. anyway, read the story and come back here to tell me what you think!

oh, yeah, it's a little weird in the beginning because the first chapter was a narrative paper or something that i had to do for seventh grade lit. then i just kept writing the story, and i'm gonna keep writing it until i get 36 chapters and 4 books, baby!!!! yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry. i got carried away there for a second.
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[James]

Lol, I have just read chapter 1, and that is a good (and funny) story. It is soooo gripping, that now I am going to read chapter 2, becuase I want to know what happens to Jamie, and the pennie!

[UPDATE (Capter 2)] Wow, I have just read Chapter 2, and this story is starting to get a bit wierd. But I still think it is great, and now i am going to have to read Cahpter 3!

[UPDATE Chap. 3] OK, I have just read Chapter 3, and I am starting to sense some inspiration from the MI4 swamp scene . But it is still cool. I am so gripped, now I am going to read Chapter 4.

[UPDATE 4] Chapter 4. I see now. This is a sort of modified version of MI4 (like Pirates of teh Carribean)

Jamie = Guybrush
Coin = Murray
Location = The Swamp

lol, onlt joking. Now I must read chapter 5!

[UPDATE 5] Wow, fighting, Matrix style!! . And funniness, err..., Matrix style. I want to know what happens in Chapter 6...

[UPDATE 6] I like this story, mainly because it is crazy and funny.

[UPDATE 7]


[UPDATE FINAL!!!] That is a really good and funny short story. You should read it if you like crazy and funny stories!
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[Das Mole]

yeah, i like the beginning of the second story the best, chapter 9, i think it is hilarious. i can put it on the site, i guess....
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[James]

i want to see Capter 9!!! !!!!! !!!!! !!!!!
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[Das Mole]

okay.

chapter 9

i think i'll leave you in suspense

i already have chapter 10 written, but you'll just have to wait until somebody publishes my story to read it! which could take a while.
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