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Okii's Version Of Billy
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 4:46 pm    Post subject: Okii's Version Of Billy Reply with quote



Bring the comments and criticisms.

My opinion:

I think this looks amazing. All I would suggest is make the face features a bit more consitent, so they are easier to animate.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok first of all, the hair is pretty cool, now for the rest of the body: i think you should base the head more on the billy we already have. and if possible change the T-shirt to a jumper.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 11:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow. that looks really good. the face is a little cartoony, but...

i think his should be less of an egg shape, and more of a watermelon kind of idea. like an upside down egg that has the shape of a watermelon...or something. and his neck could be a little smaller, and the color of the t-shirt should definitely be something else. maybe a red or a navy blue.

i know it looks like i'm really going at you...but i'm just trying to give my opinion. i mean, it's not like i could do any better than that. actually, maybe i could try drawing billy...although i'd probably fail miserably. i'm not too good with drawing on computers, but i'm really good at drawing by hand.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 7:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Das Mole wrote:
i'm not too good with drawing on computers, but i'm really good at drawing by hand.


That happens with a lot of people. You can get pens on pads that attach to the computer and draw on the screen what you draw with the pen. A lot of artists use that.

But, hardly anyone can draw well straight onto the computer.



And I agree with Das Mole that we should try different colour tops...
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 9:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey das mole, why don't you just draw billy by hand and scan it in, the upload, if you have a scanner that is Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 6:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I smell a Draw the Billy competition coming up :p Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 6:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

can you...model it in 3D? Very HappyVery HappyVery Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 7:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy

It's really wierd now. When I look at that new pic, then at my sig... in Yufster's drawing, Billy's head looks so squashed and silly. Didn't notice that before.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fix the face and possibly change the color of the shirt, and that would be perfect! (And we can get away from our very pixelated look. A little pixelation is good, but we currently have waaay too much. Wink )
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 29, 2004 1:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really good painting...
I also think you should change the collor on his t-shirt, but it should be a t-shirt, and not a jumper...

Keep up good work..
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2004 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i'll try to work on the "hoody" thing Laughing but.. navy blue? ooof im sorry about that but thatts not really my favourite color hehehehe.... sorry for not being online for such a long time.. but now im back! Evil or Very Mad

Arrow im working on the site now!
Arrow helmsley.. im on the way to mail you!
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2004 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

okii shirow wrote:
Arrow im working on the site now!
Arrow helmsley.. im on the way to mail you!

Read my reply. Mr. Green
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 7:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dum dee doo:



What do you think of the hoody (up)?
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not bad but is it me or is it slightly, blurred?
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I assume he did it on purpose to prevent copying?
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